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Adrienne Rich: Resolution Amid The ‘Turbulence’

Filed by KOSU News in Art & Life.
March 29, 2012

The memorials for the poet Adrienne Rich, who died yesterday, will inc­­lude plenty of references to her feminism, her sometimes polemical leftism, her precocity, her difficult marriage (her husband killed himself in 1970), her subsequent partnership with the writer Michelle Cliff, and the books beginning with 1963′s Snapshots of a Daughter-in-Law that made her internationally famous. What can get a bit lost in all this, however, are the poems themselves. Or rather, what can get lost are the poems that don’t fall so readily into the heroic public narratives that Rich herself often encouraged.

It’s worth pausing over one of those poems. Not because Rich’s signature poetry isn’t worth reading – it is, and Snapshots is a fine place to start – but because it’s good to remind ourselves that strong writers resist becoming monuments. Even when they seem nearly immobilized in memorial bronze, bedecked with a plaque that reads “Important Poet,” there is a part of them that shifts position as soon as you look away.

In Rich’s last book Tonight No Poetry Will Serve, there is a short poem called “Turbulence.” But the turbulence in this poem isn’t a standard Richian chaos of injustice and political brutality. It is simply the turbulence of personal pain, recast as the fear one feels when an airplane encounters rough weather:

There’ll be turbulence. You’ll drop your book to hold your water bottle steady. Your mind, mind has mountains, cliffs of fall may who ne’er hung there let him watch the movie. The plane’s supposed to shudder, shoulder on like this. It’s built to do that. You’re designed to tremble too. Else break Higher you climb, trouble in mind lungs labor, heights hurl vistas Oxygen hangs ready overhead. In the event put on the child’s mask first. Breathe normally

The poem has two related aspects worth noting right away. The first is its remarkable fractured syntax – the way the poem prepares us for a verb with “cliffs of fall” as its subject, but gives us instead a kind of admonishment: “may who ne’er hung there let him / watch the movie.” The twisting lines mirror the speaker’s panic. The second quality to notice is the poem’s adaptation of another poem, Gerard Manley Hopkins’ “No worst, there is none. Pitched past pitch of grief,” from which Rich’s poem borrows several phrases.Hopkins’ poem is one of the great cries of anguish in the English language, its tortured phrasing occasionally resolving into a ruined plainness: “Comforter, where, where is your comforting?”

It’s impossible to know what physical or mental pain Rich has in mind here. There are some likely possibilities – most obviously, Rich herself was tormented for years by rheumatoid arthritis (the disease that eventually killed her, according to her son). But such speculation is largely beside the point. Rich’s poem, likeHopkins’, is about the extreme edge of what can be endured. And the tweaks she makes toHopkins’ lines are intriguing. Here is the source of the fourth and fifth lines above:

O the mind, mind has mountains; cliffs of fall Frightful, sheer, no-man-fathomed. Hold them cheap May who ne’er hung there.

Hopkinsis saying, basically, that our own minds can cause us to despair, and that only someone who hasn’t experienced this sort of pain would hold it “cheap.” Here is Rich’s witty revision:

…Your mind, mind has mountains, cliffs of fall may who ne’er hung there let him watch the movie.

Of course, says Rich, the people who aren’t bothered by the type of anguish I’m talking about – this turbulence – are content to go about their business, keep on watching Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man’s Chest, and so on. Rich has never been a funny poet, but there is a stoic humor that complements the poem’s fundamental seriousness. If Hopkins views mental anguish as a series of plunges, Rich sees it as a rise in a fragile conveyance (“It’s built to do that”) that is a symbol for our fragile selves (“You’re/ designed to tremble too”). And of course, the higher you go, the further there is to fall.

But the most interesting thing about this odd, short poem is its conclusion. ForHopkins, there is the final fall into death or sleep: “all / Life death does end and each day dies with sleep.” But for Rich, still playing with the sanitized language of air travel, gives us something quite different:

…In the event put on the child’s mask first. Breathe normally

Rich is doing something very complicated here. She’s mocking the stilted way in which we discuss true disaster without really discussing it (“In the event…”). But she’s also finding, in the stale language of Official Preparedness, a kind of truth. What can one do in the midst of anguish? “Put on the child’s mask first”: Think about others. How can we calm ourselves? “Breath normally”: Which is to say, breath regularly. And what is controlled breath? For a poet, it is the English line, which has been held steady through disaster from Gerard Manley Hopkins in the nineteenth century to Adrienne Cecile Rich in the twenty-first. Honoring that line involves little drama, perhaps, but no small amount of resolution – and it is this perseverance that makes a poem like “Turbulence” memorable, and that makes its author impossible to forget.

David Orr writes about poetry for NPR Books. His most recent book is Beautiful & Pointless: A Guide to Modern Poetry. [Copyright 2012 National Public Radio]

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